We have been working since the first week of school on how to write our thoughts down concisely onto paper. This is easier said than done! I have been working them up to our process of writing using the format RACES. This stands for:
Restate
Answer
Cite evidence
Explain
Sum it up
When students write this year I am looking for ALL of this! We have been writing opinion pieces so far, and it did bring up the question of how you don't need the "c" for cite evidence for something about yourself. However, if your evidence comes from something else, like a story, you must cite it.
Example using RACES for the question, "How did Alice Coachman persevere?"
Restate: Restate the question in your sentence. "Alice Coachman persevered in many ways."
Answer: Answer the question. "Alice didn't stop running even when her father wanted her to stop, Alice didn't quit when people treated her differently because of her race, and Alice worked hard even when her teammates lost."
Cite Evidence: "According to page 33, it states that Alice's father wanted her to quit running. The text says, "...."
Explain: "When Alice decided not to quit, she won a gold medal. It proves that persevering pays off."
Sum it up: "That is how Alice Coachman persevered during the hardships she endured trying to do what she loved."
This is a really thorough example, but I am working up to them being able to do this. I want them to write down the information that they read and synthesize, then cite their sources from the text. It is a delicate balance! Some children want to only pull out quotes from the text, and others only want to write down what they read and comprehended, with no direct text evidence.
Why RACES? Why does it matter? When students take the ACAP at the end of the year this is what is expected. We want them to be successful. This also prepares them for middle school and beyond!